Peer assesment feedback for final thriller opening

Feedback from the class:

Positives:
- Running water v.effective at the start
- Music builds up well, mystery and intriguing
- You can clearly see where title came from - reflections used
- Having no dialogue worked well with the psychological thriller
- Camera work is good and steady where required
- Music is good
- Good variety of shots/ music matches action well e.g. looking in mirror
- Ecellent titles. Effective without drawing focus away from narrative
- Jonny's costume, in particular wearing white at the end connotes purity/ innocence.
- Great camera angles
- Great juxtaposition of shots.

Negatives:
- Jonny's costume could connote his characters role more
- Confusing narrative - going to the fridge

Nominal grade offered by teacher at this stage: Grade A